Critical opinion needed urgently? - paddle boats for sale
   Ode to a horse 
 Oh, horse! 
 Why Did You show no remorse 
 They have begun to tackle me oneth Mine 
 When I was in einundzwanzigter century, I would call an ambulance 
 If I do not even know what it was 
 Because 
 I come from the sixteenth century 
 When a string pot I Did wee 
 Oh, horse! 
 The lack of remorse for their 
 Do I get tired 
 Terriblee 
 I took care of you 
 Do you still know how 
 I invite you to a beautiful chair 
 With the shilling from the sale of my palette 
 Frommeth my boat 
 I was prevented from crossing mine too 
 For my house 
 FIE lice unhappy! 
 For me, my bridge are also forced to sell 
 For Bridel 
 You got me homeless 
 Willith not you be my friend 
 Orthis endless torment?   
Tuesday, February 16, 2010
Paddle Boats For Sale Critical Opinion Needed Urgently?
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3 comments:
Oh, Willie
This is so stupid.
Ode to a horse
It's nonsense, of course.
A wise man once said, humor and emotion go hand in hand, took much except on the side, but I can see through cleverness and style, a new, exciting and independent of the rules I think you have a good poem, a little basic research and needs work on grammar and spelling, but I like it well done.
I think poen a contract potentially ruining Humor addd "If I were in the XXI century, I call an ambulance
If I do not even know what I think cogens: P was
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